Digimon Comic sketch

My first comic style picture. Now just need to color it. What do you think?

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Panel #1 (top left)
Kiko Ichijouji was in her room that she shared with her older brother, Ken. She was doing some homework that was not due until two weeks from now. "Hm...I'm bord." She said as she leaned back in her chair. 'I wonder where Ken ran off to.' Suddenly she saw a bubble floating outside the screen door that led to the balcony. She rose from her chair and peeked outside. There she saw Ken leaning over the side as another bubble appeared. "Hey, big brother, what are you doing?" She asked as she slid the door open and joined her brother. "Hey Kiko, I'm just blowing some bubbles." Ken said before he blew another bubble that floated over to Kiko.

Panel #2 (top right)
"Did you want to blow some?" Ken asked. "Sure, but i don't think mine will be as great as yours are." Kiko said as Ken made a wand for her. Sure enough, when Kiko blew her first bubble it popped before leaving the wand. "Try again but this time not as hard." Ken suggested. Kiko dipped the wand into the soapy water and tried again. This time her bubble left the wand and floated a little in front of her. She watched it as it floated above her before popping just above her. She looked down at her wand sadly. "I guess I'm just not a good bubble blower." She said sadly. "No your not. You just need to keep practicing." "Where you always good at this." Kiko asked looking at Ken. Ken then told her about how, when he was younger, his older brother taught him to blow bubbles. Kiko dipped her wand and blew as gently as she could. Her bubble left her wand and went up as high as it could, never popping.

Panel #3 (bottom)
"I did it!" Kiko said excitedly. "Way to go." Ken said as the two were joined by their partners, Leafmon and Reremon. "What's with all the shouting out here?" Reremon asked as she and Leafmon jumped up onto the balcony. "Big brother taught me to blow bubbles and i just blew one that went high up without popping!" "Well that is really cool, Kiko. So do you guys want to blow bubbles together" Leafmon asked as he blew a bubble using his bubble blow attack. "Sure" Kiko said smiling as she joined Leafmon in blowing bubbles. Ken smiled as he joined his partner and sister with the bubbles. 'You are all weird but I guess I am too.' Reremon thought to herself as she joined the others and soon the balcony was filled with bubbles everywhere.

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Ken, Leafmon, and Reremon (c) Digimon
Kiko (c) me